Wheres the oomph?!

Remember my previous post about coming up with an example for my upcoming presentation?

I said I was either going to be very daring or very evil.

I chose the evil route.

But I still had to bypass the rehersals which took place today at my place.

Lets just said that my target of example wasn't really very happy.

His face was all black!

So I had to edit...

and edit...

and edit...

After much editing, I feel that theres no more oomph in my example already.

Damn!